Been a while since I submitted something. I've mostly been wanting to just make my writings longer, but it turns out that breaking them down into parts is a better idea.

Image is by ~gamera1985, I told him for a while before I posted it that I was interested in using the image for my story, but I couldn't be bothered to write this one until just a little while ago.

Tell me what you think, and if I left in any plot holes, or give me ideas on how to develop the story if you have any.