Chapter 2 of "Under the Moon of Taxoxcia," originally named "Call of the Vixen." <br /><br />As Thomas and Bethi explore the ruins of Taxoxcia, they begin to uncover an astounding secret of these ancient people.<br /><br />I did another round of editing this time, going so far as to actually read the story aloud. I&#039;ve found that this does indeed help the editing process.<br />---<br /><br />Under the Moon of Taxoxcia<br /><br />Chapter 1 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch1-137722511">[link]</a><br />Chapter 2 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch2-138088183">[link]</a><br />Chapter 3 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch3-138673939">[link]</a><br />Chapter 4 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch4-139399761">[link]</a><br />Chapter 5 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch5-139432780">[link]</a><br />Chapter 6 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch6-140185242">[link]</a><br />Chapter 7 - <a href="https://tomjhyde.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Moon-of-Taxoxcia-Ch7-140185551">[link]</a><br /><br />---<br /><br />As always, comments and critiques are more than welcome!<br /><br />Story and characters are copyrighted by me.