I'm taking my time with this one. I'm trying to focus on effectiveness of the narrative, quality... I'm just an amateur. I may not succeed.

For example, I tried the opening bit more from Missouri's perspective, but it didn't feel as compelling as coming from Blanca's.

Regardless, hopefully this is enjoyable and compelling. Hopefully, you are interested in what may happen next. (I am kind of interested, because I haven't really thought that far in advance yet... hmm...)

The only payment I get for these stories is your comments. So, if you have a moment, comment. On the other hand, don't waste your time sending chats or notes. I won't answer those. In particular, I have no desire to pay anyone to illustrate anything I have ever done. (Although if you do it just because you want to, I'll be happy to look...)