This continues to be an experiment with pleading AI's to do my writing for me. I feel like this part started with a bit too much description that becomes a bit repetitive, but it still kind of works. I tried to tone down the descriptive aspect towards the end, but the AI devolved to stunted incomplete sentences which started to become annoying too.

Hopefully, readers, you are following along. Let me know how you like the writing style. I'm guiding the story, but just trying to tweak knobs to get the wordsmithing to work. Let me know how you think I should tweak!