Notes:
I thought of many storylines for many different characters before realizing that what really matters is what happens to Charity in this story. So, many great upheavals occur which go un- or barely noticed during the course of this story. For now they are just in my mind. (If I had attempted to write it all, I’d never finish the story.)
A lot of exposition in this chapter just to remind the reader what the heck is going on
The ponygirls, Hazel and Garnet, are not selfish creatures. They have goals and lovingly plot secret schemes together.
Yes, Missouri, there is a political statement in this chapter.
This is the third and final book. Of course the stakes are much higher!