Wow. Both Aife and Maisie's sections were particularly hard for me to write. For Aife and Zeigh, the scene required a sense of tension and fast paced action. Those types of scenes are really hard to write, I find. I get swept up as I'm writing but my typing is so much more slower than the scene playing in my head. Hopefully, I captured enough details to make the scene make some sort of sense. For Maisie, a body modification scene can be erotic. I hope that this one is despite the impersonal cruelty. Hey, these are fictional characters and they will suffer severely, but I am not here for the forces of darkness. Sun will again shine on... well... some of these characters.
I find that I am learning more and more about the world and the characters with every passage. I mean... what the hell are metal gypsies? Oh, yes, we will see, dear friends. One day... And what happened to the sorceress sentenced to the Joppa dungeons so long ago? Oh, yes, she's still around...
Hopefully, there are readers out there and if so hopefully you are enjoying this tale.
Part 1