Here is the second excerpt from the novel that I started - "To Sleep In My Mistress' Bed". I am conflicted whether this excerpt or the previous excerpt should be the first chapter of the book. (Or, of course, the third option... neither.)<br /><br />Which one grips the reader more? Which one makes the reader want to read more? If you, dear readers, have an opinion, feel free to express it.<br /><br />...and remember, Paty is pronounced PAY-TEE, not PATTY!!