I'm posting the next three final chapters as I start my new job, so sorry if they seem a little rushed.
A quick point, if you don't have good constructive criticism, or nice things to say, don't bother posting. Being mean for the sake of being mean is a waste of comment space.
P.S. I just found out that I accidentily switched Ben's last name in a couple of chapters, I don't know when I'll have them fixed, if I fix them. So, sorry for the continuity problems