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You (That is to say, Ravener) are enjoying a nice weekend trip in the city. You almost wish your vacation could last forever. Be careful what you wish for.


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A second-person story written for Ravenor11 . 

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Features tight bondage, some encasement, some breathplay, and a very evil villain in the form of ToniBabelony's Jilly. 

Writing a second-person story is both sort of easy and sort of hard. I quite enjoyed writing it, and I'd like to do another. It's kind of difficult to balance how often I use words like "you" and "yours." Let me know what you think, I'm eager for critique or suggestions on this one!     


I recently did a quick little addendum to this story.  Click here to check out the alternate exended ending.