An orc in a sci-fi setting goes searching for trouble in an abandoned ship, and she finds it.
My Thoughts
I'm often torn between giving my thoughts on the piece and spoiling the story, especially when there's actual plot - or something like it. This story isn't terribly heavy on plot, though, so we can simply say that if you're not into lots of latex and sci-fi bondage you should probably steer clear. If your tastes are very firmly in the real world, I don't think this will be quite up your alley.
noted that when I write a scene that's explicitly supposed to be sexy, my style and diction greatly diverge from scenes that are not explicitly so erotic. What do you think?