I think that I like writing. I hope that this story is enjoyable.<br /><br />I always struggle with endings. Can you tell? I just wanted to finish the story towards the end and get it out there.<br /><br />What do you think of the narrative? Too confusing? It jumps around a few times, cutting between the present - Kas the model being used at the MirageCorp spectacle - and showing how she got there.<br /><br />I also plan on having one last MirageCorp contest centered around this concept - the "Spectacle."