Reviewed 20 June 2015
An ancient piece. Back when I spent more time (read: any time) roleplaying, a lot of thought went into characters, their roles, and their interactions. It felt nice to have one's own little universe; it didn't need consistent timelines or canon. The characters were the point, after all.
Time goes by; people change and fall by the wayside. Originally, this was part of a "mirror universe" art theme, where different deviants did crazy kooky alternate versions of existing characters and ideas. This was my 'entry'.
In retrospect, it has heart and it was an earnest attempt at fiction, but it falls short. It reads, to me, like some tawdry fan-fiction. However, it served its purpose and was an early attempt by me at creating longer prose fiction without a bondage scene every twenty lines.