I recently commented on a young writer's poem that was meant to be a Haiku. It may have been an instance where I could have easily just kept my opinion to myself and not left a comment, but I did. Not one to critique without putting my money where my mouth is, I had to see if I could come up with a Haiku myself - using the critique'd poem as inspiration.<br /><br />All comments are welcome, especially if you know something about Haiku's. &nbsp;&nbsp; -Darios<br />&nbsp;