I still suck at writing sex scenes. In fact I'm not even that good at reading them. So once again I came up with a story I'm not really equipped to write, and found a way to convey its contents indirectly. "Balloon Girl in the Park" wound up expanding into a larger overall setting in my head, and this piece takes the form of a review/article on an H-game that would use that setting, mixing depravity and moral choices. (On the other hand it doesn't have the TF angle of "Dollmaker"). If this game existed, I would play the hell out of it.

The idea for the deflation spell and balloon store came directly from this entertaining little sprite animation by KonekoRyu, which helped me expand the scope of the morality angle of the piece in really interesting ways.