When I released Story 1 some commenters said that it was interesting, but not particularly erotic. I was a little shocked because I felt that every chapter was steeped in eroticism. Different people have different tastes, I guess. So, I decided to work a little harder to insert more general eroticism in Story 2. I wrote chapters 8-10 (of 18) last, thinking that I was just going to do something gratuitous. But as I wrote, I realized how important these chapters are for the story. After all, you, the readers, barely know Laysan. All you have are my assurances that subGrrl loves her for some reason. (Of course, I've written 150 pages of a novel specifically about Laysan, so am a little more familiar with her charms.)<br /><br />All this is to say that these next three chapters are not so gratuitous after all... But, are they erotic? They are to me. But, where has that gotten me in the past? So, I would be intently interested to know what you readers think. Be honest. Beat me with you words. Say what you must. I will still honor you even if you think it is complete shite...<br /><br />Navigation:<br /><a href="http://fav.me/d51nfwb">Story 1: Submissive</a><br />In which subGrrl becomes intimate with a voice in her head and the conditions of restraint within which she must endure.<br /><br /><a href="http://fav.me/d551d4g">Story 2: Submissive Feminist</a><br />In which subGrrl's reality coefficients are adjusted for nefarious purposes.<br /><br /><a href="http://fav.me/d56t5dy">&lt;-- Prev</a> (*v*) <a href="http://fav.me/d57baiv">Next--&gt;</a><br /><br />Story 3: