This story was a little harder to write than I expected. A transformation story based on a platforming video game should make sense, but there's those pesky physics to worry about (just how DO barrel cannons work and float around???).

I think the best thing to come out of this was thinking about "enemies." That brought about Yuki and the Ratpack. It didn't make sense to have a jobber wander around back and forth doing nothing to not get squished (see also: red koopas). I'm going to take a few suggestions from the journal post (Wanted: Team Names for the Transformation League ) for team names for future stories and make the idea of a Spoiler Team a recurring thing. Especially since it means the ladies here get to play the part one day.

This story was also going to use the giant barrel boss originally to chew the girls up like bubble gum, but I couldn't think of a good way for that to play out. So we got a giant robot instead.

I'm always looking for feedback, whether raw feedback on the story (I'm almost positive I missed some typos), or suggestions for something similar in the future. Leave those comments!