I wanted more from this.&nbsp; Fire and brimstone.&nbsp; An unholy mashup of Liam Neeson's speech from Taken, Delenn's "Only one human captain has survived combat with the Minbari" speech, and just about any of Niska's monologues from Firefly.&nbsp; But... I am no JMS, so we have what we have.&nbsp; Angry, pissed off Donna making it very personal indeed.<br /><br />Edit: due to requests for clairty, and wanting to add a bit more characterization to Duncan/Donna, I've done a quick pass over the first half of the chapter, adding more detail to their body and some of its... difficulties.<br /><br /><a href="https://www.deviantart.com/dkfenger/art/Moonfire-1-847877014">First</a><br /><a href="https://www.deviantart.com/dkfenger/art/Moonfire-45-929366304">Prev</a><br /><a href="https://www.deviantart.com/dkfenger/art/Moonfire-47-932577719">Next</a>