Part of the experiment of this story (other than trying a muscular female lead) is to explore going a little further into their heads.  I mostly write from a limited third person perspective by reflex, perhaps due to influence time spent in amateur theatre.  This has been a little more "yes, I can show what's going on in the focus character's mind".

For this part, I wanted Sasha's perspective for a specific reveal, and because it would be more fun.  I figured breaking it out as a separate chapter would make the jump back and forth less jarring.  Unfortunately it also makes the chapter kind of short...

Sasha gets what she wanted, and rather more...

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