A fun little story about two people and some magic. It was fun to try a story with both characters already "experienced" with body magic stuff, which is something previously I've found is kind of hard to pull off -- as a writer, you need a way to pull the reader along and the usual way is to have a character who's also a proxy experiencing this for the first time, otherwise you end up with pages of exposition.
In some ways this feels like it could have more content, but it wraps up nice enough that I'm deciding it's finished.