EDIT-
Massive facelift on this one, I really wasn't happy with the first version of it.
Changes include a clean up of events, more detailed events and a change in tense from past to present.
I think it reads a lot better than the previous flawed version.

Hope you guys enjoy.

It is down to :iconsilenceyoursword: now to continue and to finish the story as he sees fit. I'm sure if he takes it further that things will turn out great and suitably perilous.