Massive update. I think this reads a lot better now, the events within the plot are a lot less hashed together and i think i've greatly improved the pacing and fixed some annoying punctuation errors. <br /><br />Hope you all enjoy this one a bit more this time around.<br />-----<br /><br />For <a target="_self" href="https://darklordmenchi.deviantart.com/"><img class="avatar" src="https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/a/darklordmenchi.jpg?10" alt=":icondarklordmenchi:" title="DarkLordMenchi" /></a>