(256 Words)

For ObsydianDreamer's Flash Fiction Competition - Third Round! 

Prompt was 256 words, no adverbs.  I decided to make the scene fit the word count.  :D

Oh my God, tho, the adverb thing was torture.  I was forced to use semicolons.  CURSE YOU! ;P  Plus, even though I cleave to the Chicago Manual in most things, I couldn't collapse spaces around ellipses because that bollicks-up word-counting functions, and just looking at it is making me twitch.  :wth:

Still, I rather like how this one turned out. :D

Edit: Now, with some appropriately fancy 3d illustrations!
Cache - Aftermath - 01 by YppleJax Cache - Aftermath - 02 by YppleJax
Cache - Aftermath - Super-Dramatic Video Orbit