I have to say, while I'm pretty pleased that I managed to get most of this chapter done over the long weekend, some of the diction and pacing could use some work. Not 100% happy with it, but that's normal for me. If nothing else, I hope you all enjoy it, girmdark though it may be <img src="https://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/frown.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=":( (Sad)"/>. It is based off an M-rated video game, after all.<br /><br />The next chapter will be on the shorter side, as Sagramor faces the consequences of his actions, and finds himself on a new journey...<br /><br />And as always, any and all comments, favourites, suggestions or constructive criticism are appreciated.<br /><br /><b>First Chapter - </b> A Day for Celebration: (<a href="https://thephoenixking.deviantart.com/art/The-Grey-Path-Chapter-One-A-Day-for-Celebration-311164927">thephoenixking.deviantart.com/&hellip;</a>)<br /><b>Next Chapter - </b> Sagramor of the Grey (<a href="https://thephoenixking.deviantart.com/art/The-Grey-Path-Chapter-Three-330582091">thephoenixking.deviantart.com/&hellip;</a>)<br /><br />Preview image by <a target="_self" href="https://poly-m.deviantart.com/" ><img class="avatar" width="50" height="50" src="https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/o/poly-m.gif?1" alt=":iconpoly-m:" title="poly-m" /></a>, used with her permission.