This was my entry to Bioware's Dragon Age: Asunder Creative Writing Contest a few months back, and while I didn't win (or even get an honourable mention) it was a fun experience, and definitely something I'd be willing to try again! <br /><br />The story here is essentially unedited from the version I submitted for the contest, so as to accurately reflect what I gave to Bioware. As always, feel free to review and comment, every little bit helps me to become a better writer. Also expect to see more Dragon Age stories coming down the line in the next little while, so consider this a taste of things to come...