Ok everyone its time I get serious about this novel!&nbsp; I want to get a book published eventually so be brutally honest with your feedback about descriptions, punctuation, structure, etc... I wont get published if I suck so I need your help! <img src="https://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title="=) (Smile)"/>