Well my second time using someone else's characters for a story, This time a fairly new one, Pepper from ammysun fame.
I thought her smuge demeanor would make a good foil to Bong-Cha, originally the Jablon family were not going to show up but I decided to add them to the plot halfway through to have Pepper interact to more of my characters. I hope I got there new chararter right.
Also this has a decent number of continuity nods in it.