A story in 5 panels, A Ravyn Crowe 100th (wow!) Special


Fantasy made real, the newest app from Ravyn co. "Call me skeptical," Rob said as he looked down at his phone. A dream to make fantasy real did seem pretty incredulous. Even from a humor perspective, Rob was intrigued. He had never been anything special, he'd a few times wished he could have had a better maybe happier life. He clicked on the brightly rainbow-colored link and waited for his dreams to come true.

Almost instantly, he felt his neck begin to twinge. It almost felt like it was going numb. He shook it roughly only to feel a crack. It was alarming, but it was the laryngeal prominence breaking into a billion pieces. Upon shattering, it reformed into a shape just a fraction of the size it was. His neck also had cracked and pulled a little bit longer. He felt his body begin to convulse. His arms shrinking down into willowy twigs, his arms aching, feeling extreme fatigue as muscles atrophied, becoming thin and weaker, his shoulders cracking and reforming into rounded shells of their former size. His skin paled and became Almost porcelain in their appearance

His hair felt like it was being pulled. It grew out slightly as it changed in hue, first from brown to black, then he watched as the part he could see became purple. He was sure it was going to be dyed, he couldn't have naturally purple hair, could he?. His hair felt heavier as it thickened. he fell to a knee as his spine, each bone broke and reformed in a smaller shape, his lower ones curving in forcing his chest forward and rear out. His nipples all of a sudden became alert. pushing out harder and firmer and longer than ever before. The pulsing behind them feeling wonderful but also a bit painful. The pain and pleasure mixed as his skin stretched. They stopped growing as firm but ultra-sensitive A-cups.


The skeletal changes hit his legs now. The now-familiar cracking sound bones breaking and reforming bringing the floor ever closer, dropping a good 11 inches from his height. The fat in his body moved like rivers under his skin, both titillated and revolted him. The feeling of things being pulled, shrinking, and moving slithering feeling of fat sliding around was most unnatural. The fat started to pool in his thighs and butt. Becoming well cushioned, it made them soft and squeezable. He still felt uneasy on his feet, but he straightens out, his thick thighs squashing his genitalia. Only for a moment, however, with a pop that hurt and again aroused him, his testicles popped back up into his abdomen from where they originally dropped. He felt them shrink and move for just a moment before they lose all feeling as they take on a new function. His scrotum flattened and becomes more sensitive, he felt it start to pull into his body. It split tearing into a new pair of lips. It enclosed his rapidly shrinking penis. It was at this point his bones finish reforming as his feet became impossibly tiny.
He looked down at his phone. “Process complete, welcome to the world of women Raven, the first minute free, lifetime subscription $439,000.”

“What?” she shouted shocked at the high but mature sound coming from her mouth. Her hand flew up, noticing the piercings now. Her eyebrow and nose, and so many in each of her ears. She saw in the reflection the dark almost emo makeup on her face. Her eyes were lined by dark lines, her face marked by black crosses. What was she now?

The phone beeped, it demanded payment, she surely didn't have the money but there was a new option now. “Become an affiliate, new life free” She clicked on it surely being an affiliate would be easy, maybe even she'd get some money from it. She scrolled through the pages of user agreements. Finally seeing the accept button.

Pushing the button there was a blinding green light in her eyes. All she could see was green. The first thing feeling off was the shirt. How could it possibly feel looser? It was already loose enough that she was almost swimming in it. Then it was her pants, they also felt loose. Was she getting even shorter? Please, she thought, please don't turn me into a child.

Energy, pure sugar-driven energy started to build. She felt an overwhelming need to be moving. Moving anywhere it didn't matter running, jumping. Oh, skipping that sounded fun or flying. She giggled people can't fly. Well, not unless they were on an airplane, and who would ever want to ride one of those big fake metal birds. Real birds were some much nicer, especially Crows, oh, and Ravens. That was funny her name was Raven. Was she named after one of the gorgeous black birds? They were so big and impressive. She was sure she was friends with a few of them she was a manic Pixie after all.

Her back began to pulse as 2 large wings pushed their way out. They had started on her shirt. Then they had pushed their way into her body now they were emerging from the back. The young pixie flicked her wings nervously. The new muscles she now possessed, responding. This was going to be fun, she had to go back to her home, but she knew her job now. Find unhappy boys and turn them into happy girls. Whether they would be old, young, rich, poor, it didn't matter she had to make them happy. She knew she was going to change hundreds.

She knew this was her calling, she used her magic to wrap herself in a simple spandex outfit so she could leave the human world forever, it was no longer her home. She would be back to visit there were so many unhappy boys just like she was. Ravyn had found her true calling.




Artwork generously provided by Teysia

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