Boy, it's been a lot longer than I thought since I've put something out. Sure has been a slow year. I've just had little to no inspiration beyond some small stuff here and there. Hopefully I'll be a bit more productive in 2015. I still can't title things, as you can see.<br /><br />This is one of two weight gain stories I'm trying out, and this one changed a lot from the initial spark. Originally I was going to do a story based on <a target="_self" href="https://unknownrez.deviantart.com/" ><img class="avatar" src="https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/u/n/unknownrez.jpg?1" alt=":iconunknownrez:" title="UnknownRez" /></a>'s Queen Peach drawings, but despite a bit of planning I kind of lost momentum when it came to actually writing it. Then it turned out that somebody had written a (considerably shorter than what i had planned) version of it that was 90% the same. That was after I had decided to abandon it for now anyway. Then this was going to be a gradual weight gain sequence taking place over a long period of time based on <a target="_self" href="https://kawaiidebu.deviantart.com/" ><img class="avatar" src="https://a.deviantart.net/avatars/k/a/kawaiidebu.png?3" alt=":iconkawaiidebu:" title="kawaiidebu" /></a>'s Preliminary Progressive Peach sequence that I can't seem to get to link properly.<br />, a fantastic weight gain sequence even if it was never completely finished. Kawaiidebu really needs to do more gradual sequences, he's great at them. But then I decided that since I already had a gradual weight gain story in the works, I should make a more traditional growth story. Funnily enough, the beginning and ending of this initial over-time story is nearly the same. The various stages of Peach's growth are mostly based on that sequence anyway, although her growth ends in the third-to-last panel.<br /><br />As might be obvious to some, this whole sneaking around the castle thing is based upon the sneaking segments from Paper Mario on the N64, and the first version of the first scene had Twink and the castle floating as in that version, the idea being that it started during Paper Mario. That got cut fairly quickly when the over-time part was removed. &nbsp;The part where she bakes the cake and then the Gourmet Guy's reaction cut out since it doesn't really add anything to the story.&nbsp;Obviously there's room for a lot of improvement in the expansion here, but I hope for something I've only written a little of it's fairly good for what it is.<br /><br />I'd like to make some sort of sequel starring Daisy or something in the future, although I'm not sure how it'd go as of writing this. Maybe a gradual expansion as originally planned? Maybe something different from weight gain? Who knows. The other story I had planned could be out shortly or not for a while still, since I'm not quite happy with where it is at the moment. I hope you enjoy this, anyway. If I've missed anything in my proofreading, feel free to point it out, and criticism is welcome.