And here it is, a remake of my first story uploaded to here, which can be found here. <a href="https://randomguy665.deviantart.com/art/Metroid-Expanding-Encounter-261661661">[link]</a><br />This took a while, but I think it's a big improvement over the original, so tell me what you think about it. Criticism is good, and I'd like to see what people think. If you have anything to say at all, leave a comment. I wanted to see how much I've improved, so once again, comment so I can find out.<br /><br />Wow I thought I'd have more to write here. Oh well.