Oh god I'm terrible at dialogue. Well, this is my first venture into the realm of AR, and I hope I did it well, or at least good enough for you to enjoy. This one might lead into a series, and I had a few idea if it does, but just enjoy it as a standalone for now. I think I missed a couple of things I meant to put in, but I think it works how it is now.<br /><br />Originally I was going to star off doing AR in a Metroid story, but I decided to actually do a non-Metroid story for once, and this is the result. Again, I hope you enjoy, so comment and critique.<br /><br /><br />Again, CRITIQUE. I really, really need to just just what's crap, which is a lot, and how to make it not crap. So comment. Please, so I can stop making terrible stories.