As the visual story of 'The Transfer' nears the final few pages for chapter 2. It would be nice to know, if I should continue with chapter 3 visually, or if you'd like me to work on writing chapter 4? or if there is any other story of mine you'd like to read or make a visual version of?

If you're following the written story, this is part of chapter 2, of the pdf version.

If there's any spelling or grammatical errors, please let me know and I'll fix them.

For the best visual quality, its best to download the image.

For anyone new, this is my first attempt at trying to do a comic version, of one of my stories, The-Transfer-Pt-1-Prelude is a good place to start if you would like to read the written version this is based on (there is a bit more storyline & context missed in the visual one).

Or The Transfer - v1 - page 1 for the start of chapter 1 of the visual story version.

Or if you'd prefer to read the pdf version (which this is currently the part of the second chapter visually, link is below DA has changed the way to link apparently? hopefully it works?...)

Any comments on what's good or not, is always welcomed.