If you're following the written story, this is part of chapter 2, of the pdf version.

If there's any spelling or grammatical errors, please let me know and I'll fix them  

For the best visual quality, its best to download the image  

For anyone new, this is my first attempt at trying to do a comic version, of one of my stories, The-Transfer-Pt-1-Prelude is a good place to start if you would like to read the written version this is based on (there is a bit more storyline & context missed in the visual one).  
Or The Transfer - v1 - page 1 for the start of the visual story version. or The Transfer Chapter 1 if you'd prefer to read the pdf version (which this is currently the start of the second chapter visually)
Any comments on what's good or not, is always welcomed.