Little bank holiday Monday treat, just to finish off chapter one  one more week and I should be back at it, I'm currently munching my way through chapter two.

I 'am currently working on the rest of the story. And this should put the visual version of the story, roughly at about part 9 of the DA posted written posted stories, or near the end of part 1 of the pdf version, moving onto part 2  

For anyone new, this is my first attempt at trying to do a comic version, of one of my stories, The-Transfer-Pt-1-Prelude is a good place to start if you would like to read the written version this is based on (there is a bit more storyline & context missed in the visual one).  
Or The Transfer - v1 - page 1 for the start of the visual story version. or The Transfer Chapter 1 if you'd prefer to read the pdf version (which is currently coming to the end of the first chapter of visually)
Any comments on what's good or not, is always welcomed. 

If the text in the images are blurry, its best to download it to get the best quality. I've not worked out a way to compress the images enough so they look ok as an image on DA yet. Any tips or advise would be welcomed