This is my first attempt at trying to do a comic of one of my stories, (The-Transfer-Pt-1-Prelude) is a good place to start if you would like to read the written version this is based on.
Or The Transfer - v1 - page 1 for the start of the visual story version. or The Transfer Chapter 1 if you'd prefer to read the pdf version
Any comments on what's good or not, is always welcomed. 
If the text is blurry in the image, its best to download it.
And Just to let you know there is going to be a couple of weeks gap before the next posts due to a family emergency.