This is my first attempt at trying to do a comic of one of my stories, (The-Transfer-Pt-1-Prelude) is a good place to start if you would like to read the written version this is based on.  
Or The Transfer - v1 - page 1 for the start of the visual story version.
Any comments on what's good or not, is always welcomed. 
If the text is blurry, its best to download the image.