Zehra is meeting with the commanding Junyu again. She just can't seem to say no to him. However, this time she might she wish she could.

Here is part two of my contest entry for

. I originally meant for this to all be one part, but it got a bit long so I had to split it in two. Part three will be a while. I'm going to take a break and structure it a bit more, but this was how I was planning on ending part one.

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Compelling Comands part 1Zehra Viola sat at her desk, browsing the mind control forums she normally frequented. Her whole adult life, she has been fascinated by hypnosis, to the point of dabbling in suggestion. Mostly it was roleplay, pretending to be under the thrall of her partner. However, something was always missing.
She clicked out of a hypno-themed image gallery and entered a more social mind control site. There, she quickly found a message in her inbox from someone called MndCtrlU.
"Hello. I saw your post about wishing to be subjected to real mind control. Odds are you're joking, but on the off chance you're not I wanted to throw my hat into the ring. While I'm unable to turn you into a mindless drone I believe I can bring you closer than anyone has ever before. I have a rather unique talent for mind control. Sort of a curse in a way. If you believe you're ready for a level of domination that you are unlikely to have ever experienced before then please reply."
Zehra read the message

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