The 20 something Zehra has long since fantasized about one thing, mind control. She has some other kinks, but she longs to be truly dominated by another, not by whips and chains but to be held prisoner in her own mind. Still try as she might she was never able to find someone who could indulge that desire. At least until now. But is it all that she wished, or did she get more then she bargained for?

This is my entry for the Mind Control Contest from

. I had this idea for a while now. I got it while watching Jessica Jones on Netflix and though Killgrave could likely find a woman who enjoys his powers if he looked hard enough. Granted it would take a great deal of self control on his part.

Part 2

Compelling Comands part 2Zehra Viola leaned against a wall as she waited. She was wearing a flannel shirt that was tied in front and a pair of low-cut shorts. Her bra was threatening to show itself. She tried to hold perfectly still, but she would occasionally twitch or glance around.
"Were you waiting long?" Her date, Junyu, walked up to her.
"10 minutes." Zehra blurted out before she could say no. She always had the habit of showing up early. She was just so excited to see him, or rather hear him. That said, she had toyed with the idea of being late just to piss him off.
"Are you ready to come with me?"
"Yes." Zehra smiled. "Always."
"Then follow me." Junyu turned and walked down the sidewalk. After a little while, they got to the corner. "Stop." He waited for the cars to pass before crossing the street. "Walk."
They both knew she would start and stop as he did, but Zehra enjoyed the orders. She followed him like his puppet to the fair.
"Buy us tickets."
Zehra walked up to the ticket booth. "Two adults." She

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