My first submission to this bizarre little community we've got going here.<br /><br />Do let me know what you think. Is it to long, too descriptive, not descriptive enough? Maybe the theme is wrong. Does it need more chocolate and lesbians?<br />I like the character of Noah, so I may do more with her.<br />Convertron inspiration all due to the incredible GOD-JESUS toy from Japan.<br /><br />EDIT: Double spaced it a bit to make it easier to read.