A review of :iconalexwarlorn:'s Pony POV Wedding Arc so far. I've avoided going into long details on the matter at this point but I am willing to explain further on any point if asked.

Considering trying to review other things like this, maybe polish up the style a bit. 

Disclaimer: I admit that thought I may have bias towards my own preferences, I did not write this with any bias against the creator or any others involved. These are my opinions, opinions I will clarify or defend if asked, and they are not influenced by malice.  Though some may accuse me of looking for excuses to bash the work, this is honestly what I saw. Nor is this intended as any attack on the creators: it is an honest airing of my views and an honest criticism of the work in questions.