This is the updated and repaired version of All Hail The Queen Part Two, as voted for in this poll: [link] . Changes to the story as a whole are fixing capitalisation, breaking up larger paragraphs, some small changes to make things flow better, and spelling/grammar tweaks.
The original artists comment lies below, as do links to the scrap original, and to the other related parts.
part 2 of my story inspired by
's pic all hail the queen redux [link] . hopefully i can get the alt ending and the other idea i have related to this story done up soon.
The original version is now uploaded as a scrap, found here: [link]
Part One can be found here: [link]
The Alternate, Darker, Ending can be found here: [link]