This is the updated and repaired version of All Hail The Queen Part One, as voted for in this poll: [link] . Changes to the story as a whole are fixing capitalisation, breaking up larger paragraphs, some small changes to make things flow better, and spelling/grammar tweaks.
The original artists comment lies below, as do links to the scrap original, and to the other related parts.
this is inspired by
's pic all hail the queen redux [link] . i'd asked for permission to do this ages ago but only just got round to it and figured it could do as part of an ff8/ff9 double whammy. as you may guess from the image, it's eiko up to no good again and dragging vivi in her wake about three years after the game.
i suppose it's a pretty loose inspiration now though, since the idea i had to justify eiko petrifying garnet kind of necessitated some explaination and a lead to a somewhat happy ending in this. plus, the scene actually including the events of the picture, eiko does act quite differently... at least in this version.
i've actually wound up with a lot of ideas on this one. a darker alternative ending as well as a story based on the reasons i give for eiko not really enjoying the results of her temporary peroid as a queen. partly because of that, i had to split it in 2 parts. in this part, eiko hatches and carries out her plot...
The original version is now uploaded as a scrap, found here: [link]
Part Two can be found here: [link]
The Alternate, Darker, Ending can be found here: [link]