1st let me note that I normally get the author's permission to post an altered version of their stories or artwork, BUT, I have tried several times to contact both SketchySeraph and Bendzz via Notes, and Chat asking for permission. Neither method was successful, I never got ANY reply! So... I am putting it up for now, should either object I will gladly remove it. The story was VERY entertaining, but there were a few places I wanted to expand on the dialog, also the image was well drawn but, like most people, I longed for a color version and began playing around with it in GIMP. I tried to alter the image to fit the text as much as possible and hope you, and they, enjoy it. Check out the links to their sites for more fun stories and images:<br /><br /><a href="https://www.deviantart.com/sketchyseraph/gallery">www.deviantart.com/sketchysera&hellip;</a> (The original author of the story.)<br /><a href="https://www.deviantart.com/bendzz/gallery">www.deviantart.com/bendzz/gall&hellip;</a> (The creator of the original image.)