My first directly explicit story! Shocking, I know. Sorry if i broke my typical mold but I've always danced around explicit themes anyway. Honestly I tried to keep it pretty tame, especially in the actual sex scene; just trying to keep things as tasteful as this kind of stuff can be. Anyway, I actually really enjoyed righting this one, both because of the theme and the content. I got the idea for a strip club that lets you rent the girls as dolls from reality believe it or not. In Japan, these doll brothels have been showing up, where people can pay for a night with a high end sex doll instead of buying one due to their price. Leave it to Japan to do this kind of shit I suppose. Regardless, take that somewhat weird concept and throw some Tf in there and bam, you have yourself a pretty alright story. Beyond that, I liked the idea of Seth going from oblivious and reluctant to finding he really does enjoy owning May as he does at the end. There's more to the story though, but i'll leave what that could be up to the imagination for now. Probably going to write it up if i dont get sidetracked as always with silly stuff like "college," and "actually writing non-TF stories." Regardless, I feel like a broken record asking for feedback like i do. What can i say, i do this to improve my writing skills, and I can't do that if I don't see what you all liked and didn't like, so let me know your thoughts and if you'd actually want to see this story continued! Peace