Hi all ![]()
So, this idea really drew me in! It’s not exactly a gender-bender, so sorry for that. I’m posting this for free and in open access. But if anyone’s interested, as usual, I’d be happy to hear your feedback.
In general, it’s a story about a parallel world where social roles between men and women are swapped, and a staunch supporter of traditional male values, who is successful in his masculine role, finds himself there. You could say I decided to expand this story a bit.
And yeah, about the images, I feel like this story might work better without them, but maybe I’m wrong.
Bradley stood by the window, nervously drumming his fingers on the windowsill. His gaze wandered across the city beyond the glass, but his thoughts were far from the beautiful view outside. Sighing heavily, he turned back toward the bed, where his girlfriend, Sarah, sat with tears shimmering in her eyes. Her voice trembled, but she still tried to speak calmly.
— I just want... I want you to understand me, Bradley. I'm not just "your girlfriend," I'm a person! I want to work, to grow. I want to have my own goals, not just the ones you set for me, — Sarah tried to sound reasonable, but her voice faltered with each word.
Bradley didn’t want to hear it. He turned away from her again, closing himself off from the conversation, which to him seemed absurd.
— Work? — he repeated, not hiding the mockery in his voice. — Your job is the house. You should be home, cooking, taking care of me. That’s what normal women do. Why do you need this ridiculous obsession with "self-development"? That’s not your business, Sarah. Stop with these "trendy" ideas, unfollow those feminists, and get this nonsense out of your head.
Sarah frowned, her lips trembling. She loved Bradley... or maybe she was with him just because she didn’t know how to be without him. Her thoughts were tangled, and with every word from Bradley, she felt more and more vulnerable. Deep inside, she understood she deserved more.
— Bradley, I... — her voice shook, and she tried to pull herself together. — I don’t want to argue, but this really matters to me. I want something more in life. I want to find myself. You can’t forbid me from just being myself, can you?
Bradley smirked, turning to her with obvious irritation. To him, this sounded like yet another foolish female whim, meaningless and stupid.
— Find yourself? — he shook his head with a sneer. — Sarah, you’ve already found yourself. You’re my girlfriend, and your role is to be with me, to support me. You’ve always known how I feel about this. A man is supposed to be the leader, the head. And a woman... well, a woman should be grateful to have the good fortune to be by the side of a strong man.
Sarah wiped her tears, but they kept rolling down her cheeks. She couldn’t believe he truly thought this way, that he didn’t see her as a person, just as his shadow. Why hadn’t she noticed this before, enjoying every minute of their relationship? Why had she closed her eyes to the fact that Bradley only saw her as an accessory to his life, not as an equal partner?
Sarah tried to find answers within herself, but at that moment, her mind was consumed by disappointment and pain. She realized that all this time she had been living in his world, playing by his rules, convincing herself that this was how it should be, that love meant sacrifice. But now her world was falling apart, and she could no longer ignore the truth.
Her face twisted in pain from this sudden realization, and she covered her face with her hands and sobbed. Her tears flowed more intensely, but Bradley was no longer moved by them. All he felt was irritation, watching her as if she were a child who couldn’t understand simple things.
— Your tears don’t affect me, Sarah. I know you're trying to make me feel sorry for you, but it won’t work. You either accept things as they are, or... — he didn’t finish when Sarah suddenly stood up and ran straight for the door, crying silently. Bradley was stunned for a moment, not expecting this from her. Usually, she would withdraw, try to find a compromise, give in.
— Sarah! — he shouted, his voice full of irritation mixed with surprise. He wasn’t used to her leaving the room during an argument, especially like this, without any explanation.
She quickly grabbed her coat and threw it over her shoulders. It was clear she was nervous, shaking, and struggling to keep it together.
— You... you... — she tried to start, but she knew it was pointless. She had spent too much time trying to make things work with him, too much time giving in. Instead of fear, anger arose, and before leaving, she stopped by the door — You... you never listened to me, Bradley! I spent years trying to be perfect for you, but it was never enough. There was always something wrong! But you know what? I’m done.
She paused, hoping he might understand.
Bradley stared at her as if he couldn’t believe what he was hearing. Sarah had never spoken to him in that tone before, and it irritated him even more.
— Done? — he finally responded, dripping with sarcasm. — Done with what? Having everything you need? Not having to work because I provide for you?
Sarah squinted, her anger rising. He hadn’t understood anything.
— You never heard me, Bradley... — Sarah stood by the door, her hand on the handle, but she hesitated, as if hoping his words would change, that he would finally understand. But nothing happened. Bradley stood there, full of self-satisfaction, convinced he was right. She sighed and slowly walked out of the apartment.
— Well, go then! — Bradley shouted after her, his voice full of rage and contempt. The door slammed shut with a deafening thud, and the room fell into silence.
Bradley remained standing in the middle of his apartment, irritated and angry. He couldn’t believe Sarah had actually left. He was sure it was temporary. "She’ll come back," he reassured himself. But the anger still lingered.
Bradley headed to the living room, where a strict, minimalist atmosphere reigned. His apartment was a reflection of his life—order and discipline in everything. Black leather sofas, a glass coffee table, business books on the shelves—nothing extra, nothing distracting. This was his ideal—his space, where everything was done his way.
He glanced at the mirror by the door. The sharp lines of his suit accentuated his lean figure. He liked how he looked—confident, successful, a man who knew what he wanted. Bradley was pleased with himself, his achievements, and who he had become.
He walked to the window, looking out at the night city, the lights flickering in the distance. Thoughts swirled in his mind. His hands trembled with tension, and his heart was beating too fast. He was angry at Sarah, very angry, but he couldn’t even show it to himself.
— I wish I lived in a world where women knew their place, — he muttered under his breath, his voice quiet but filled with anger. — Where men could be men without having to listen to all these whims and nonsense.
After Bradley spoke these words, he felt a strange weariness. All the anger and tension that had built up over the last few minutes began to slowly fade, leaving behind a void. His thoughts kept circling around what had happened. Sarah had left. But he was sure it was temporary, that she just needed some time to realize how wrong she was.
— She’ll come back, — he muttered to himself, taking another step toward the bedroom. He tried to convince himself that everything was under control, that nothing serious had happened. But deep down, something nagged at him, as if he had missed something important.
He walked over to the bed and sat on its edge, taking off his shoes. His thoughts returned to Sarah, but he quickly pushed them away. There was no point in thinking about her. She just didn’t understand how the world worked. She had to accept it, and if she couldn’t, that was her problem.
Bradley lay on his back, staring at the ceiling. The air carried a light chill, but he was comfortable. Everything was familiar, predictable. He closed his eyes and with relief felt his body relax.
