First of all, huge thanks to  :icononemesseduphero: OneMessedUpHero who was able to recover the story that Deviantart deleted without warning. 

I must admit, when it was deleted (along with some other writings) it just took the wind out of my sails.  It really soured me on writing anything on Deviantart that they would delete things without even giving me the respect of at least telling me what the problem was.  I would be more than willing to edit if they told me what was problematic.  I thought maybe I misremembered something.  But having a chance to read the story again, I still don't see why it was deleted.  I can easily spend 5 minutes and find lots of examples of things on Deviantart that are far worse.

However, as angry as I was with Deviantart, there were a lot of people who just wanted to know the missing part so they could read the story.  So for them, I have made some edits and now I'm posting it again.

Part Seven available here