This story ended up a lot longer than I anticipated, so I'm trying out releasing it in parts. I have an outline for the rest of the story and should be done fairly quickly

Curious as to what release formats for stories people enjoy!
I'm expecting three parts, with this being the setup for what will happen with Luis. Let me know what you think, in terms of writing and what you expect to happen
11/09/2022- Added a 'Part I' to the title to make it more clear that this is a chapter!