For those of you unfamiliar with these characters, please read this story first: [link]
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Part 8: [link]

...I think that that's the longest continous story I've ever written. Hard to think that I started writing it back in September. At the final tally, the story is something like 37 pages long, and over 18,000 words. :faint:
So, anyway, I'm sorry if the ending is a bit of a letdown after so much buildup. I had some idea of where I was going, when i started writing, but while I was writing, I'd get an idea or something and decide to throw it in and before I knew it, the story was much longer then I'd expected and I had no idea where it was heading anymore.
I had a lot of trouble just getting this part and the last one written becuase I was completely burned out on this story and I wanted to end it.
Still, I had a lot of fun and I think I learned a lot about the writing process doing this. I've already got an idea for the next story with NIcole and Rachel, but in the meantime, I want to take a break from them and write about some other characters for a little while.